英語力向上・維持のための英作文～To maintain English skills 5

今日のIELTSライティングはvaccine予防接種を法律で義務化するか否かというトピックです。

グレーな感じで義務化する分には良いでしょうが、受けないと罰則を課せられるというんではまずあり得ないでしょうね。

ではいってみよー💪

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic.

Many childhood diseases can now be prevented through the use of vaccines.

Should parents be made by law to immunise their children against common diseases or should individuals have the right to choose not to immunise their children?

You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

You should write at least 250 words.

Source:Ielts-exam.net

The immunisation of children will generally reduce the risk of catching various types of diseases but it does not mean that parents should be required by law to use vaccines for their children.

The use of vaccines is effective for majority of children or even adults. However, we should consider some minorities are not able to use vaccines due to their health conditions. For example, some babies born prematurely or those born with heart, lung and kidney diseases should not be taken any vaccines. Therefore, it is not reasonable to require parents by law to use vaccines.

Some countries provide vaccines to children for free. In such case, there is no one left behind even if they are in serious financial difficulties. On the other hand, vaccinations may not be free or even expensive in other nations. If vaccinations are required by law, there will be a huge financial burden on many parents.

Making the law to restrict parents to immune children is non sense as we originally have our own immune system. Especially in most developed nations, there is not much risk of exposing to a serious infection such as ebola or zika viruses.

To conclude, the use of vaccines is generally effective for majority and majority of us may be in favour of use of vaccines for children. It reduces a risk of exposing to a serious disease and helps thousands of lives in many countries. In spite of that, some children should not be allowed to use vaccines because of their health conditions. Meanwhile, it is uncertain whether they are provided vaccines for free and if it has costs it is necessary to consider the minority who cannot afford to pay for the vaccines.

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途中まで余り字数がいかなかったので最後の結論部分で稼いでしまった(笑)